Chapter 36 · Month 21 · The Wedding

The Venue

Two venues, two prices, one honest opinion

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            Penny
            teacher
            12:06
          
Two brochures, two prices: the Mill Room at $1,900 with the long table, or Fennick's back room at $640 and his mother sitting near the door. I'd take the cheaper one and the better room, and I don't know if that's the money talking or me.

            Algy
            designer
            12:07
          
The ceiling in the Mill Room — you could hang the lanterns Mum's already bought, and then Susan's by a drafty door all afternoon. That's the bit I can't get past.

            Penny
            teacher
            12:08
          
You're doing the thing where you fix the door instead of saying what you want. Forget the photos — is the long table worth $1,260 of your deposit to you, honestly?

            Algy
            designer
            12:10
          
The table isn't; her being comfortable is. So — save the $1,260 and put it toward the July invoices, and I'll tell Mum she's at the near end of Fennick's back room.

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