Chapter 30 · Month 18 · The Engagement

The Ring

His mother's reaction, at volume

Oldest line first — the newest line is at the bottom.

Penny teacher
This receipt was in the pocket of your coat — "ring, resized, $45", dated the Tuesday you said you were at Dev's. So what's actually happening, Algy?
Algy designer
That's a resizing receipt and I'd love to say something clever, but my mum rang an hour ago about it, so the surprise lasted roughly as long as a kettle. It's real, it's second hand, and I was going to hide it somewhere so sensible I'd never find it.
Penny teacher
So your mum knows before I do, and she'll have opinions at full volume by Thursday. Before any of that — do you want this, or is it just the time for it?
Algy designer
Yes — and the fear's that you'll hear "not yet" as "never", because I've been that before. She had the ring in her hand by Thursday, so this is out now; it's still a real question, not a performance.

Who should have warned the other one about their family?

One vote per chapter. No account.

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What the audience made of it

Algy 0 Penelope 0 Both 0 0 votes

The next chapter opens with these numbers on the table. The character with fewer votes is expected to demand a recount.

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