Chapter 160 · Month 59 · Starting a Family

The Long Walk

The first real conversation about children

Oldest line first — the newest line is at the bottom.

Penny teacher
The book's still on the table by the gate — two hundred and forty names, and I've counted them twice. You wanted to know what I keep looking at; it's this, because I can't write a name in it until we've said out loud how many children we actually mean.
Algy designer
Two hundred and forty names and not one of them is a number yet. Say yours first and I'll say mine, and we don't get to laugh at each other's answer.
Penny teacher
Two, if the money holds — but I want to hear yours before I write anything down. My mum kept a book like this and wrote Mark's name the same day she got home from the hospital, in biro.
Algy designer
Two. And I'll ring Susan tonight and ask her to dig out my old one, so we can both be in biro in the same week.

Whose silence about it is worse?

One vote per chapter. No account.

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What the audience made of it

Algy 0 Penelope 0 Both 0 0 votes

The next chapter opens with these numbers on the table. The character with fewer votes is expected to demand a recount.

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