Chapter 176 · Month 63 · Starting a Family

The Long Walk

A 3am night that neither of them handles well

Oldest line first — the newest line is at the bottom.

Penny teacher
The envelope's open on the kitchen table at 3am and your name line is still blank, so I've written mine first and left yours a millimetre of hope. Are you going to sign it or are we doing this at four as well?
Algy designer
It's blank because I was awake at two doing the sums — $1,240 a month and me on the twelfth. I'm not stalling, I'm just scared the pen's the easy bit.
Penny teacher
Then say the actual thing you want, out loud, in the park at three in the morning. Not the sums — the want.
Algy designer
I want to still be here at four, and at forty — so I'm signing it now and begging you to stop needing to ask. Here's the truth, though — the night I bought that test I got a loo brush and didn't tell you, because wanting it scared me more.

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