Chapter 174 · Month 62 · Starting a Family

The Misunderstanding

Whose name is on what, and whether it matters

Oldest line first — the newest line is at the bottom.

Penny teacher
So you sent the form with your name first and mine second. Funny how that's the order the money arrives in too.
Algy designer
That's not quite it — the form's blank on the name line, because I didn't know which of us fills it. Nothing's been sent; it'll be in the same envelope as the chip shop receipt from Tuesday.
Penny teacher
You've gone quiet on the name line and it's eleven at night. What did you read into it — that I'd mind my name second?
Algy designer
I've had my name first on nine things that went nowhere, so I didn't want to presume a tenth. The line's still blank, Penny — write it how you want it.

Who is being unreasonable, and who is only tired?

One vote per chapter. No account.

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What the audience made of it

Algy 0 Penelope 0 Both 0 0 votes

The next chapter opens with these numbers on the table. The character with fewer votes is expected to demand a recount.

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