Chapter 130 · Month 51 · Starting a Family

The Misunderstanding

Whose name is on what, and whether it matters

Oldest line first — the newest line is at the bottom.

Penny teacher
The deposit form's on the bench, and there's one name on it — yours, in the box marked "primary saver," because the money came out of your account. Do we fix it, or does that not matter to you either?
Algy designer
Okay — that's me reading a form wrong, not you being a footnote. Get a pen: I'll put your name first, mine second, and the $1,150 stays where it is, because it's ours, not mine.
Penny teacher
You've gone quiet, and it's the particular quiet you did in the car park after Fennick's. Just tell me what you read into it — I'd rather hear it wrong now.
Algy designer
I read it as the money deciding who gets a say — and I'd rather be skint than be the one deciding. I do this, Penny: I go quiet and make up your answer instead of asking.

What should have happened next?

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What the audience made of it

Algy 0 Penelope 0 Both 0 0 votes

The next chapter opens with these numbers on the table. The character with fewer votes is expected to demand a recount.

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